“Which of the following do you think students should do during their free time of the night?
1、Do work through which they gain work experience, such as a part-time job or volunteering;
2、Learn sporting skills;
3、Learn to play a musical instrument
首先針對選項1讓步。→ Earning an income may be the immediate consideration among the students who choose to do part-time jobs. Meanwhile, a volunteering job, although it does not pay, helps students to gain work experience and to build a social network. 接下來的考慮是：接著寫對于選項2的讓步，還是先用轉折把選項1否定掉。最好是趕緊轉著否定，否則的話，讓步內容會冗長。→ However, work, paid or unpaid, is exhausting. 接下來順延著把選項1和2共同的劣勢說完。→ In fact, it is the same case with learning sporting skills. Although sports strengthen our body, they consume energy, which should be saved for the next day’s study. 然后，分別否定選項1和2。→In addition, many jobs are available off campus, and when they finish at the late night, students have to travel distances during the night, and their safety and security is uncertain. 接下來討論sports的時候，可以和jobs建立邏輯關系，避免流水賬一樣的討論。→ Although students do not have to leave the campus to learn sports, many sports require daylight, or proper weather or facilities that are unavailable during the night. 反駁時，也可以舉例（舉例不是僅僅可用于立論）。→ For instance, playing tennis is impossible unless there is good lighting and a good weather, and seldom can a person swim in an outdoor pool in the freezing temperature.
Unlike doing a job, particularly a job for money, and doing sports, playing a musical instrument is easy, consuming less strength or energy. 通過邏輯鏈接，迅速引出關于益處的討論。→ In fact, it may be quite relaxing. 接下來舉例論證可能是論證的最佳選擇。→ Last semester, when I was learning piano, the melodious sounds were delightful, creating a lot of pleasure for the night, and every time, I woke up the next morning revitalized. 接下來討論益處的第二點。略。