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9月28日雅思小作文真題高分范文!
2019-10-10 15:11   作者:新航道   閱讀量:

  分享雅思考試小作文真題范文。每一篇范文都經由專業團隊反復校對,最終外教審查定稿。成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。

  今天,我們來看一下9月28日雅思小作文真題:組合圖。

  

  9月28日雅思小作文題目

  The chart and graph below show the number of tourists from three countries to Australia and two kinds of tourists between 1995 and 2005.

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  高分范文及解析

  組合圖的特點:1. 一個圖復雜,另一個簡單;2. 兩個都簡單。

  基于學生的習作的修改

  

基于學生的習作的修改


黑色字體為學生習作,橘紅色字體為老師修改


The bar chart gives information about the numbers of traveling intravelers to Australia from three countries in two separate years, which are 1995 and 2005, and the lines are the illustrations of two different kinds of tourists to Australia from 1995 to 2005.


The number of tourists in 1995 is most notable in Japan, It is notable that the number of as Japanese tourists (140,000) ’s number are was the largest amountthat is roughly equal to that of UK tourists and that of US tourists another two groups combined.←語法現象:主語從句:名詞性從句被形式主語it指代。It is also noteworthy that very few Japanese went to Australia was significantly less popular among Japanese tourists in 2005 than in 1995, ←寫作法:描述數據所體現出來的事實。 since the number of Japanese tourists which was in 2005, was merely 10,000  ←語法現象:用狀語從句引出數字. The number of British visiting Australia rose to 140,000,so were that of American. The year of 2005 witnessed that both American tourists and UK tourists were 140,000.  ←語法現象:賓語從句:時間為主語 + witness + 在那個時間點上發生的事件。


黃色高亮部分提示:主語的多樣性。


The number of tourists in Australia which staying at hotel was volatile during the years. After a surge to the all-time peak high(180,000), it slumped there was a slump to a point (140,000) nearthe original level. In addition, in terms of the number ofbackpackers, the years 10-year period between 1995 and 2005witnessed the rapid soaring growth to 120,000, and despite the growth, backpackers were constantly fewer than hotel guests. It is notable that the number of backpacker had always ranked lastduring the 10 years.


Overall, both the total number of travelers to Australia from the three countries combined and the number of backpackers haveincreased significantly over the decade. 

  

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