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雅思小作文高分范文:線圖來了!
2019-10-10 15:02   作者:新航道   閱讀量:

  分享雅思考試小作文真題范文。每一篇范文都經由專業團隊反復校對,最終外教審查定稿。成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。

  今天的主題是線圖,提供兩篇高分范文,供同學們參考!

  

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  雅思小作文題目一

  The graph below shows changes in percentage of households owning the car in the UK between 1975 and 2005.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  高分范文及解析

  The four lines are the illustrations of the four types of car ownership ←會這個詞,對于這個主題的寫作尤其重要,因為可以極大地精簡措辭。  in the UK over a 30-year period of 1975 to 2005.

  The one-car ownership and the ownership of more than two cars were noticeable, since the two types of ownership kept growing during the period, ←永遠用“總——分”結構展開,先描述分組和趨勢。然后寫每條線的具體→ one from 40 percent to 55 percent and the other from 5 percent to 10 percent. It is also noteworthy that the highestpercentage and the lowest were in those two categories.

  分組清晰:上升兩條線寫完,接下來寫下降兩條線

  Households that own two cars and households with no car accounted for decreasing proportions. ←永遠用“總——分”結構展開,先描述分組和趨勢。然后寫每條線的具體→ The slump in the two-car ownership was constant. A quarter of UK households had two cars in 1975, and in 2005, one household out of ten had two cars. In terms of the proportion of households with no car, the decrease (30 percent to 20 percent) was interrupted by a 5-percent slight increase between 1985 and 1998.

  Overall, the period witnessed varying changes of the car ownership, in four types, in the UK.

  注意主語(文中黑體加下劃線的單詞)的多樣性。


  雅思小作文題目二

  The graph below shows three production in the forest industry in a European country. The production is timber, pulp and paper during the years from 1980 to 2000.

  

  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

  高分范文及解析

  The three lines are illustrations of a European country’s production of three types of forestry goods between 1980 and 2000.

  強烈建議把與其它線有交點的線最后寫,

  于是pulp最后寫。

  

  分組是為了讓寫作的內容有組織,從而在CC評分項得分。

  The production of timber and that of paper both doubled over the period, and the patterns of increase were highly similar, despite the widening gap between the amounts. ←永遠用“總——分”結構展開,先描述分組和趨勢。然后寫每條線的具體→5 tons of timber were produced in 1980, and with a continuous growth, which accelerated in the last 5 years, the figure reached 10 tons in 2000. During the course of time, the country produced 4 tons of paper in 1980, and after thestagnancy at 6 tons, the production grew quickly to 8 tons.

  Pulp was different from timber or paper. Its production started at the original level of timber and soon surged to the all-time high (8 tons), and then plunged to 4 tons, a major point of the period. It continued decreasing, afterwards, yet in a sluggish way and reached the all-time low. The subsequentyears saw a slow return to 4 tons. It is notable that, during the fall, the country produced pulp less than timber and paper one after one.

  Overall, the two decades witnessed varying tendencies of the production of those forestry goods.

  注意主語(文中黑體加下劃線的單詞)的多樣性。


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