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7月27日雅思大作文真題參考范文| 父母們,快停止你們的溺愛吧!

2019-08-01 16:23     供稿單位: 新航道    

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  2019年7月27日雅思大作文題目

  溺愛孩子的后果

  “Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up? ”

  解析&審題

  本題是近年來難得一見的新題。當然,這個話題對多數考生而言并不陌生。

  父母對孩子有求必應,這是不是對孩子的愛?對孩子的愛到底怎么表現?過分溺愛對孩子的未來會產生什么樣的影響?

  大家可以先討論過分寵愛孩子對孩子的現在是好還是壞,然后討論這種做法對孩子的未來產生的影響。有求必應,似乎是在對孩子表達愛,但同時也讓孩子失去自控能力,使孩子缺失規則教育。這樣,當他們長大成人后,面對一個需要規矩的世界,孩子們就會不開心,對生活失望,從而離群索居,甚至走向反社會。

  以下看唐老師對以上內容的具體表達。

  老師筆記

  01

  It is true that all parents tend to spoil their children as a natural sign of showing love. Nevertheless, the negative effects of over-spoiling inchildhood can well last into adulthood.

  誠然,所有父母都傾向于溺愛他們的孩子,這是愛的一種自然表達。然而,兒童時期過度溺愛的負面影響很可能持續到成年。

  解析

  (1) 本段直接提出話題,并表達自己的觀點:溺愛孩子會對其成年產生負面影響。

  (2) Childhood 兒童時期

  (3) Last

  (4) Adulthood 成年時期


  02

  While there is nothing wrong with showing a great deal of love to children, over-indulgence is definitely not good for children. As a matter of fact, parenting is about loving children without spoiling them, which means that parents have to reinforce good discipline in their children. Without good discipline, children would never know what self-control is. Unfortunately, too often things go the other way. That may explain why spoiled children are on the rise in modern society as many parents give their children everything that they want to have or they want to do in order to please them.

  盡管向孩子們表現出很多愛沒有什么錯,但過分的放縱絕對不利于孩子們。事實上,養兒育女指的是愛孩子而不寵壞他們,這意味著父母必須加強對孩子的良好管教。沒有良好的紀律,孩子們永遠不會知道什么是自控。不幸的是,事情往往是相反的。這也許可以解釋為什么被寵壞的孩子在現代社會越來越多,因為許多父母為了取悅孩子而給他們想擁有或想做的一切。

  解析

  (1) 本段論述溺愛孩子是錯誤的,但當今社會這個問題卻越來越嚴重。

  (2) There is nothing wrong with… ……沒有錯

  (3) Over-indulgence 過度放縱

  (4) As a matter of fact 事實上 (= in fact)

  (5) …is about… ……指的是……

  (6) Reinforce 加強

  (7) On the rise 處于增長中

  03

  The spoiled children are likely to grow up to be unhappy and unpleasant adults. They may feel unhappy when they are not allowed to fulfill their wishes immediately. Also, they would turn into unpleasant grown-ups for being narcissistic, believing that they deserve “special” treatment without having to follow rules in social situations. When they grow up, then, the over spoiled children will find it hard to cope with the real world and end up either isolated or antisocial. That is why we can always trace back the drug takers and criminals to their family background where they were excessively spoiled children.

  被寵壞的孩子長大后很可能成為不快樂和不愉快的人。如果自己的愿望不能馬上實現,他們可能會感到不高興。而且,他們會因自戀而令別人不快,因為他們相信自己應該得到“特殊”的待遇,而不必在社會環境中遵守規則。因此,當過度溺愛的孩子長大后,會發現很難應付現實世界,最終要么孤立要么反社會。這就是為什么我們總是可以將吸毒者和罪犯追溯到的他們的家庭背景,在那里他們是被過分寵壞的孩子。

  解析

  (1) 本段論述被寵壞的孩子長大后會變成自己不快樂,也不讓別人開心的人。

  (2) Fulfill one’s wish 滿足愿望

  (3) Narcissistic 自戀的

  (4) End up 最終變成……

  (5) Isolated 孤立的

  (6) Antisocial 反社會的

  (7) Trace back to… 追溯到……


  04

  In conclusion, spoiling is bad for children because it can really hurt theirlong-term development. Spoiling children is easy, for it is always done in the name of love, but it will be really hard to repair their broken adulthood.

  綜上所述,溺愛孩子時有害的,因為這真的會損害孩子的長遠發展。寵壞孩子很容易,因為這總是以愛的名義做的,但是要修復他們破碎的成年就很難了。

  解析

  (1) 總結前文的主要觀點。

  (2) Long-term development 長遠的發展

  (3) In the name of 以……的名義

  (4) Broken adulthood 破碎的成年


  7分范文

  It is true that all parents tend to spoil their children as a natural sign of showing love. Nevertheless, the negative effects of over-spoiling in childhood can well last into adulthood.

  While there is nothing wrong with showing a great deal of love to children, over-indulgence is definitely not good for children. As a matter of fact, parenting is about loving children without spoiling them, which means that parents have to reinforce good discipline in their children. Without good discipline, children would never know what self-control is. Unfortunately, too often things go the other way. That may explain why spoiled children are on the rise in modern society as many parents give their children everything that they want to have or they want to do in order to please them.

  The spoiled children are likely to grow up to be unhappy and unpleasant adults. They may feel unhappy when they are not allowed to fulfill their wishes immediately. Also, they would turn into unpleasant grown-ups for being narcissistic, believing that they deserve “special” treatment without having to follow rules in social situations. When they grow up, then, the over spoiled children will find it hard to cope with the real world and end up either isolated or antisocial. That is why we can always trace back the drug takers and criminals to their family background where they were excessively spoiled children.

  In conclusion, spoiling is bad for children because it can really hurt their long-term development. Spoiling children is easy, for it is always done in the name of love, but it will be really hard to repair their broken adulthood.

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  建議背誦的句子

  1. As a matter of fact, parenting is about loving children without spoiling them, which means that parents have to reinforce good discipline in their children.

  事實上,養兒育女指的是愛孩子而不寵壞他們,這意味著父母必須加強對孩子的良好管教。

  2. That may explain why spoiled children are on the rise in modern society as many parents give their children everything that they want to have or they want to do in order to please them.

  這也許可以解釋為什么被寵壞的孩子在現代社會越來越多,因為許多父母為了取悅孩子而給他們想擁有或想做的一切。

  3. Also, they would turn into unpleasant grown-ups for being narcissistic, believing that they deserve “special” treatment without having to follow rules in social situations.

  而且,他們會因自戀而令別人不快,因為他們相信自己應該得到“特殊”的待遇,而不必在社會環境中遵守規則。

  4. When they grow up, then, the over spoiled children will find it hard to cope with the real world and end up either isolated or antisocial.

  因此,當過度溺愛的孩子長大后,會發現很難應付現實世界,最終要么孤立要么反社會。

  5. Spoiling children is easy, for it is always done in the name of love, but it will be really hard to repair their broken adulthood.

  因此,當過度溺愛的孩子長大后,會發現很難應付現實世界,最終要么孤立要么反社會。


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